Medusa Galaxy

Hey guys I made this like, last year and I just found it. Wow was I stupid -.- but anyway, this is NOT anywhere as good as you guys' stories but i was bored so i'll just copy and paste and be done with it.

oh and sry for such short chapters!




skip this part, it's just old character descriptions and crap

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Current Characters

1
Name: Rizuk
Age: 16
Power: Poison
Appearance: Longish untamed purple hair, purple droopy shirt, black draggy jeans, white sneakers, 5'9", 110lbs, dark green eyes.
Personality: Chaotic Evil, Wreckless, Blunt.
Profession: Master Assassin
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 2
Favorite Song: Pain by Three Days Grace || Valentine's Day by Linkin' Park

2
Name: Soarz
Age: 16
Power: Nature
Appearance: Short brown hair, sleeveless brown shirt, long tan jeans, brown sneakers, 5'3", 105lbs, hazel brown eyes.
Personality: Lawful evil, Strategic, Mystical.
Profession: Druid
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 2
Favorite Song: Perfect World by Simple Plan

Name: Blastion || Nickname: Fire Fox
Age: 17
Power: Lava
Appearance: Short untamed red hair, red overcoat, sleeveless black shirt, long red jeans, white sneakers, 5'6", 110lbs, dark red eyes.
Personality: Chaotic evil, Strategic, Blunt.
Profession: Assassin
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 1
Favorite Song: Headstrong by Trapt || By Myself by Linkin' Park

3
Name: Xeche
Age: 16
Power: Earth, Power Absorbing
Appearance: Short blonde hair, sleeveless black shirt, long black jeans, white sneakers, 5'7", 111lbs, hazel brown eyes.
Personality: Chaotic Neutral, Strategic, Mystical.
Profession: Master Swordsman
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 3
Favorite Song: Runaway by Linkin' Plan || Perfect by Simple Plan

4
Name: Xute
Age: 16
Power: Sound
Appearance: Short wavy blonde hair, brown cloak, 5'7", 107lbs, hazel brown eyes.
Personality: Neutral Good, Coincedential, Blunt.
Profession: Bard
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 1
Favorite Song: Forgotten by Linkin' Park || A Place For My Head by Linkin' Park

5
Name: Peace
Age: 18
Power: Many Magics
Appearance: Longish blonde hair, white cloak, 6'2", 120lbs, noticable red eyes.
Personality: Lawful Good, Coincedential, Mystical.
Profession: Master Wizard
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 1
Favorite Song: Pieces by Sum 41

6
Name: Yangtao
Age: ???
Power: Has a curse that turned his Dark Magics into Light Magics
Appearance: Short white hair, Black Cloak, 5'2", 102lbs, white eyes.
Personality: Neutral Evil, Strategic, Riddler.
Profession: Wizard
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 3
Favorite Song: Time of Dying by Three Days Grace

7
Name: Wrave
Age: 17
Power: Wind
Appearance: Silver and black hair, Black overcoat, white sleeveless shirt, brown jeans, black sneakers, 5'3", 113lbs, black eyes.
Personality: Neutral Evil, Opertunist, Blunt.
Profession: Thief
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 7
Favorite Song: Hands Held High by Linkin' Park

8
Name: Tentako
Age: 15
Power: Lightning
Appearance: Gold and black hair, black and yellow striped shirt, blue long scarf, long blue jeans, white sneakers, 5'1", 103lbs, black eyes.
Personality: Neutral, Opertunist, Blunt.
Profession: Assassin
Gender: Male
Orps hit by: 4
Favorite Song: Untitled by Simple Plan

9
Name: Hope
Age: 16
Power: Holy Magic
Appearance: Longish brown hair, pink short sleeved shirt with a red heart on it, white jeans, white sneakers, 5'4", 105lbs, white eyes.
Personality: Neutral, Cautious, Riddler.
Profession: Witch
Gender: Female
Orps hit by: 1
Favorite Song: My December by linkin' Park

10
Name: Koyuki
Age: 15
Power: Wind
Appearance: Blue hair, pink shirt, red skirt, white boots, 4'9", 98 lbs, violet eyes.
Personality: Neutral Good, Opertunist, Quiet.
Profession: Archer
Gender: Female
Orps hit by: 1
Favorite Song: The Little Things Give You Away by Linkin' Park

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((In these early chapters, the characters are in school clothes and not their described clothes above))
Chapter 1 - A Sad End


Planet Nastar

Tarlix High School
--Xeche's Locker

Rizuk: Heeey BUDDY!

Xeche: *Slams locker, eyes in shock* (thinking: CRAP, it's HIM)

Blastion: *Grab's Xeche's back Collar* He said "Hi" to you! *pulls him away from the locker*

Xeche: Wheeeh... Hi... Rizuk....

Rizuk: Heh-heh, whadduya for us today? *digs into Xeche's Bookbag* ACK! *pulls out his hand with a mouse trap snapped onto it*

Xeche: *kicks Blastion's "lower groin"*

Blastion: OHHHHHH! *falls backward*

Xeche: *Runs toward Xute's locker*

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--Xute's Locker

Xeche: *still running* Ruuuuunnnn!!!

Xute: *closes locker and looks over at Xeche running at him* What?...

Xeche: *bumping passed alot of other students and pulls Xute's back collar while still running and continues to run* Riiiiizuuuuk!!

Xute: *pulled* Wuaaaahh! *sliding down the school halls* Hold on Xeche!

Xeche: *looking back at Xute as he runs* Nooo Waay! He's gon- OOF!

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--Hall Intersection

Xeche: *dizzy* ehh~~ *shakes head* WUAH!

Hope: *rubbing her head* oww~

Xute: *gets up, finally out of Xeche's grasp, walks over to Hope and helps her up* Sorry, Xeche was being an idiot again..

Xeche: *gets up* WAS NOT! *looks at Hope* Sorry, we're just running from-

Hope: Rizuk, again?

Xeche + Xute: Yeah...

Xeche: Weh- *pulled backward and his head hits hard on the ground* ow... huh? GAH!

Soarz: Hello, Xeche!

Xute: *walks over to Soarz* Can't you guys give us a break? It's the last day of school!

Blastion: *walks to Xute from behind and punches his spine*

Xute: ACk! *falls over*

Blastion: That's the whole reason why today is special. We won't be seeing you guys the WHOLE summer. So we have to make up for that today!

Hope: Will you guys leave them alone for once?

Rizuk: *Walks around the corner* Not TODAY. *kicks Xeche's stomach*

Xeche: Argh!

Soarz: Heh-heh, wonder what we should do to them today?

Xute: How about leave us be until we get to a police station?...

Blastion: *kicks Xute's stomach*

Xute: Eh..

Blastion: Idiot!

Peace: *Walks up to Rizuk*

Rizuk: *whispers to Soarz: CRAP a senior...*

Peace: If I were you I'd stop messing with these kids.

Xeche: KIDS!? *kicked by Soarz* Ack!

Soarz: Shut up!

Peace: *grabs Soarz's hair and smashes his knee into Soarz's face*

Soarz: *falls back bleeding* UGH!

Rizuk: HEY! *jump kicks at Peace*

Peace: *grabs Rizuk's legs and throws him at a wall*

Rizuk: UGH.. *coughs blood*

Blastion: Eegh! *runs*

Hope: *glomps Peace* YAY!

Peace: *falls over* Eugh... Hope, please get off...

~~~~~~~Sorrounding Kids Cheer~~~~~~~

Xeche + Xute: *gets up*

Xeche: He can withstand a kicking jump, but not a glomp..

Xute: yeaaah...

~~~~~~~BELL RINGS~~~~~~~

Xeche: Hmm? Last class, Xute!

Xute: Yeah..

Peace + Hope: *gets up*

Hope: YAY! *jump-cheers*

All but Hope: *in class*

Hope: Huh?

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-- Geometry Class: Last Day of School Party

Xute: *shakes head* Xeche, your so simple...

Xeche: *Eating Doritos and Drinking Mountain Dew* *finishes chewing* Actually, beneath this layer of simpleness is a complex person of understanding

Xute: Lies~

Xeche + Xute: Hm?

~~~~~~~A Loud Rumbling is Heard Throughout the school~~~~~~~

Classroom: *grows silent*

Intercom: We inturrupt your class for this following announcement. We have been told by an anonymous source to exit the school.
Intercom: Please do so in an orderly fashion.

Teacher: You all heard the inanimite object. Go and run out the school!

Xeche: *watches everyone squeezing themselves out the door* Yeeaah.... I'll just wait here...

Xute: Smartass...

~~~~~~~A Loud Rumbling is Heard Throughout the school~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~Screams are heard~~~~~~~

Xeche: Hm? Damsels in distress!? Let's GO!

Xute: That's not- *sees Xeche not listening and running* uhhherrr *chases*

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Schoolyard
The sky is purple and the sun is blue. It looks as though the stars are falling from the sky. Rumbling is heard every so often when a star hits the ground.

Xeche: HUH?! It's Koyuki!

Xute: *runs at her and pushes her* Watchout! *hit by a "star"* AUGH!!! *faints*

Xeche: *gasp* XUTE!

Koyuki: Huh? *looks up and a "star" hits her* AHH!! *hit flying into Xeche's Arms* *faints*

Xeche: OOF! *falls backward and looks at Koyuki* Koy...uki... d-Dead? *looks up*

Rizuk: Haha, your precious friends are dead? Serves you RIGHT! *kicks*

Xeche: UGH!

Blastion: Heheh, *drag's Koyuki off of him* Sad girl, couldn't dodge a simple lit- *hit by a star*

Soarz: WHAT!?

Rizuk: You idiots gotta watch for those, haha. They've only fainted.

Xeche: *gets up and runs*

Soarz: HEY!

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School Field

Xeche: *looks at the sky* My... friends are gone... *searches sky*

Hope + Peace: HEY!! *they run toward him but are still pretty far away*

Xeche: *sees three stars about to collide on the ground* I'll... suffer three times the pain.. *runs*

Peace: Xeche! *trying to catch up, sees Xeche's objective* Xeche, NO!

Hope: AHH! *hit by a "Star" and faints*

Peace: *stops and looks back at Hope* CRAP! *runs after Xeche again* Xeeeche!!

Xeche: *painful memories fill his mind* RAAAHHHHH!!! *just makes it and is hit by all three "stars", faints, and appears to be bleeding*

Peace: Xeche!! *hit by a "star" and faints*
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((wow copy and pasting ruined this haha))

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((keep in mind i typed this like a movie, you'd see these things flash by in like 1 second on the movie so.. yeah, their memories))


Chapter 2 - Memories
--Part 1: Xeche

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--Xeche's Home
7 yr old Xeche: Hi mommy, Hi daddy!

Xeche's Father: Quiet son.

Xeche's Mother: *looks sadly at her son*

7 yr old Xeche: Do you wana play catch Daddy?

Xeche's Father: I told you to shut up. *smacks Xeche*

7 yr old Xeche: *hits the floor hard*

Xeche's Mother: *continues to sadly look at her son*

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--Xeche's Home
8 yr old Xeche: *watches his parents argue*

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--Xeche's Home
8 yr old Xeche: *sees his parents get divorced and fight over who gets custody of him*

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--Outside Xute's Home
8 yr old Xeche: I... Hate... Them.... *faints*

~Morning~

8 yr old Xute: *walks out* Huh? *runs over to Xeche* Hey, you okay?
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--Part 2: The School

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--Tarlix High School
---History Class

Rizuk: *whisper-shouts at Xeche* WAKE UP! *throws a paper ball at Xeche*

Xeche: *hit* Huh?

Xute: *whispers to Xeche* Your lucky Rizuk has your back!

Teacher: and THAT is why we call this school Tarlix

Xeche: *thinking* Okaaay..
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--Part 3: Rizuk

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--Tarlix High School
---Hope's Locker

Rizuk: *at his locker opposite Hope's*

Hope: So what do you think of Xeche?

Koyuki: *eyes widen* w-Why do you ask?

Hope: Because ever since this morning when you tripped onto him, you've been blushing~

Koyuki: Eh? *blushes*

Rizuk: *overhearing* Hmpt! *slams his locker*

Hope + Koyuki: *looks at the direction of slammed locker but sees noone near it*

Koyuki: *changes subject* I'm with Rizuk anyway.

Hope: I know~ *thinks of Rizuk* *blushes*

Koyuki: Eh?
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--Outside of Tarlix High School

Rizuk: RAAAH!! *punches the back of Xeche's head HARD*

Xeche: *face hits the concrete* Augh...

Rizuk: BASTARD!
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--Part 4: Peace, Koyuki, Hope

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--Outside Yangtao's House

Peace: Haha, I know right?

Yangtao: Heh-heh-heh, But seriously, now what's left to do? We've got everything we've ever asked for!

Hope: Yeah, except for good grades.

Koyuki: Speak for yourselves.

Yangtao: Hahaha, right. *sees a van coming* Huh? *recognizes it and gasps*

Peace: What's wro-

Yangtao: *pushes Koyuki, Peace, and Hope flat onto the ground*

Mysterious Van: *guns come out the van's window*
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--Part 5: Blastion

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--Outside of Tarlix High School

Soarz: *sees Xeche bleeding on the sidewalk* *runs over to Rizuk* What're you doin'!

Rizuk: Stay outta this or YOUR next!

Blastion: *choke holds Rizuk* Chill out, man!

Rizuk: LEGGO! *struggling to escape*

Soarz: *Helps Xeche to the Nurse*

Blastion: *let's Rizuk go* What's your problem!?

Rizuk: He stole HER from me!

Blastion: *sigh* Haven't you learned anything? If you wanna get ANYWHERE in this world-

Rizuk: Grr... DON'T say it!

Blastion: *glares* If you wanna get ANYWHERE in this world, you've gotta give up love. It's actually quite pathetic...

Rizuk: GRR... *closes eyes and faces away* FINE! But, I'll still hunt Xeche down until he's NOTHING!

Blastion: *shrugs* Fine.
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--Part 6: Soarz

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--Outside of Tarlix High School
It's raining

Soarz: Ahhh, rain...

Blastion: I wouldn't stand so close to that tree Soarz..

Soarz: Psh, being struck by lightning is just a myth!

*Lightning Strikes the ground next to Soarz*

Soarz: Whoa...see? I didn't get stru- *a tree branch hits Soarz and he faints*
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Chapter 3 - Decending Powers


Oblivion
--Black Platform
Everyone from Tarlix High School is in the Realm. Everyone cannot move or talk, only listen.

Cloaked Being: Welcome! Your Planet has been chosen to test something... Extraordinary.
Cloaked Being: You may be wondering why your school was chosen over the others. The fact is,
Cloaked Being: Your school was created to honor, I, Xilrat.
Xilrat: You all are very lucky. You will receive a power based on your choice.
Xilrat: Now don't worry, I will be able to take you all on no matter what powers you choose, you see, I have them ALL.
Xilrat: The only thing YOU all have to do, is LIVE through the trials.
Xilrat: Now.. BEGONE! *all the people disappear into thier own individual small white rooms.*
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--Xute's White Room

Xute: Weird... Ugh? I can talk now! Hm? *looks over at a trasparent ball with yellow energy flowing around it* i-Is.. that a star?
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Xilrat: *his voice is heard throughout ALL the white rooms* The glowing orb you all see is called an "Orp"
Xilrat: When you hold this orb, you think of a power and you will receive it.
Xilrat: Keep in mind, that how many are among you is equal to how many hit you in your world and sent you here.
Xilrat: With that in mind, the more orps you hold as you choose your power, the more powerful that poer will become.
Xilrat: The power you choose with advance as you master it.
Xilrat: Now, go on. Have fun. HAHAHAHA!
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--Rizuk's White Room

Rizuk: *feels pain fromt he Orps that hit him* *sigh* Hmm... *grabs the two Orps* I know what I want! Heh-heh-heh!
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--Blastion's White Room

Blastion: How about a power that fits my nickname... Hmmm... or, a power that advances my nickname! *grabs the one Orp*
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--Soarz's White Room

Soarz: *thinks of the tree branhces that nearly killed him* Nature's a powerful thing.. *grabs the two Orps*
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--Xeche's White Room

Xeche: Hmm.. ANY power... Why stop at one, when I could have them all! *looks at the three Orps* hmm..
Xeche: If I use them ALL for it... I won't have a power of my own... But if I only use 1, it could make the cost higher...
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--Xute's White Room

Xute: ANY power I want? ohhhh, SO many! hmm... *grabs the one Orp and a Lute appears in his hand* Cool!
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--Black Platform
Everyone from Tarlix High School is in the Realm. Everyone cannot move or talk, only listen again.

Xilrat: Now that you have your powers, it's TIME FOR THE TRIALS!
Xilrat: There is but ONE test. You must defeat your own shadow!
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Oblivion
--Grassy Plains

Xeche: Fight.. our own shadows? *Looks at his own shadow* Has that guy been sniffin' a sharpy?

~~~~~~~Xeche's Shadow begins to rise from the ground and form a body~~~~~~~

Xeche: now, THAT'S NOT NORMAL! WAH! *back-jumps to dodge the shadow figures sword*

S.Xeche: *charges at Xeche*

Xeche: Guess it's time to test the powers!
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--Volcano

Blastion: Bring it on!

S.Blastion: *uses Lava Shot*

Blastion: Heh! *stands still and a lava wall forms to absorb the attack* For a shadow, you don't reallu follow in my step, do ya!
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--Concrete Platform

Rizuk: Hmpt! *dodge's S.Rizuk's Dagger and attempts to stab S.Rizuk*

S.Rizuk: *back-jumps and uses PoiZun Wave*

Rizuk: HOLY-!
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--Black Platform
20 Students stand half alive before Xilrat, they can move and talk now.

Rizuk: *Jumps toward Xilrat* That was fun, ha-ha! Send us back so we can cause CHAOS!

Xeche: *runs up to Xilrat and Rizuk* HEY! We got these powers for a GOOD cause!.... Right?

Rizuk: Grr *throws a punch at Xeche who easily dodges it* What!?

Xilrat: You may use your powers as you wish. *eyes Xeche* Hmpt...
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Chapter 4 - The Beginning


Grassy Plain
--Outside

Xeche: W-where's-

Xute: THE SCHOOL'S GONE!

Peace: It's only purpose was to give US powers...

Xute: Hmm... *remembers a history lesson*

Peace: *gasps* FIREBALL! *the fireballs extinguishes Rizuk's PoiZun Shot*

Rizuk: *walks over to Peace* Your a quick one...

Blastion: Hm? *sends a lava wall to shield Rizuk from Koyuki's Wind arrow*

Koyuki: *glares at Blastion*

Rizuk: *the lava wall lowers and rizuk glares at Koyuki* Hmpt. *throws a PoiZun Kunai at Xeche*

Xeche: *shoulder is pierced by the kunai* AURGH! *falls grasping his shoulder*

Soarz: *a tree rises from the ground and begins to fall onto Xeche*

Xeche: Grr.. *summons a giant Earthen Spear to pierce the tree* *the tree fades*

Hope: *runs over to Xeche and heals his shoulder and gets rid of the poison, he winces as he's healed*

Tentako: *a GIANT electrical wall divides the two groups* HEY! Quit fightin'!

Rizuk: DON'T TELL US WHAT TO DO! PoiZun Shot!

Tentako: Zap! *pierces the PoiZun Shot and hits Rizuk*

Rizuk: Waugh! *hit back 56 yards*

Xeche: Whoa! How many Orps did you have!? *Blastion and Soarz run after Rizuk*

Tentako: Three, and I used em' all for my Electric Power.

Xute: S-strong... *the Electric Wall fades* Huh? *sees Xeche running in the distance* Heey!! *runs after Xeche*

Peace: Crap, where's he goin' NOW! *chases Xute and Xeche*

Hope: Peeace! Don't leeeave! *chases but trips on her shoe lace* oww~

Koyuki: *helps Hope up and looks at Tentako* Who are you?

Tentako: I'm Tentako, a freshman.
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--Outside

Rizuk: *gets up in pain* Grrr!

Blastion: Take it easy. Electricity is uber deadly.

Rizuk: Yeah, so is Poison!

Soarz: *thumps Blastion* So is LAVA! Do you realize what you can do to my nature!

Blastion: *thumps Soarz* Totally DESTROY it?!

Rizuk: Quit fighting you idiots *notices his left arm and beyond won't budge* Crap.. *pulls out a vial in his pocket*

Soarz: What's that?

Rizuk: Poison *drinks it*
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~~The next day~~

Thorvik Region
--Nashvalk City

Blastion: Okay, City is locked IN! *a Lava wall sorrounds the city*

Rizuk: Practice TIME!

Soarz: I'll hang back and kill anyone trying to enter the city!

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guys tell me honestly how bad it sucked =.- i haven't read it all and i don't oplan to read this at all till vo-tech tomorrow so until then... BLARG!


((yeah, you can tell the chapter isn't over, i'll post a continuation if u guys actually like this lol ,i think i put in too much action x.X))


(((and sorry for the multi-posts. i like to separate chapters by posts on forums x.X)))

Dude....YOU GOT A KILLER STORY!!! Genuine, complex, yet original, and also quite creative!! You did a awesome job. Keep it going. Seriously. I like it. So, lemme get this straight: you have romance, social issues, actual real life problems in high school (bullies, freshmen, etc.), action, and strategy. I also like how you've placed your chapters. Interesting conflicts....very interesting.

=D Thanks for noticing everything >.<
=O but your story is well thought out, I remember typing this with some ideas but most was just fluked ><

Btw, i made my rpg off this so theres spoilers for everyone reading this and involved in my rpg >=D

I KNOW!!! I REALLY liked how you blended the RPG as if it were your story!! Which technically it is....>_< heh, and yeah, I'm that kind of person who looks out for the little guy...only I'm not calling you a little guy....

Don't bring yourself down! Stories can always be fixed. Sheesh...I won't tell you how many times I fixed my story...just to make it presentable...heheheheh....*cough cough* over 10 *cough*

o.o ill be sure to think up mroe on spare time ^^ or if the demand grows larger x.x

Want me to advertise it for you? Seriously, I'll help if you want.

sure ^_^ i'll only be typing at my dad's place though, so... the chapters would come up every 2-4 weeks... or sooner if i lose my internet at my mom's place

ooooyyy....not cool...well, you do what you can and when you can, do! ^_^

okay! >=D (i'd just edit the first post i did with an obvious line showing where i edited lol, ill say when i do edit it though)

That's the spirit!!! ^_^

okay it's been a while since this story has been told and honestly im going to be making this shit up as i go along sooooo without further ado- *is hit* OW

Genesis: JUST START TYPING ALREADY

Jordan: FINE fine... =.- jerk

Genesis: what was that?

Jordan: I called you a jerk- okay off topic, here we go!




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back to where we left off...
~~The next day~~

Thorvik Region
--Nashvalk City

Blastion: Okay, City is locked IN! *a Lava wall sorrounds the city*

Rizuk: Practice TIME!

Soarz: I'll hang back and kill anyone trying to enter the city!

Rizuk: whatever... ACK! *dodges a tree root sprouting from the ground aiming for him* STOP THAT!

Soarz: dont WHATEVER ME!!

Rizuk: DONT TELL ME WHAT TO DO! *he shoots a ball of violet poison out of his hand toward Soarz*

Soarz: MAKE ME! *a tree sprouts from the ground protecting himself*

Blastion: *in rock dracomancer form* *punches Soarz in the stomach and teleports to Rizuk and does the same to him*

Rizuk&Soarz: UGH! *both fly backward from where they were standing*

Blastion: Quit fighting like a married couple you idiots! we're here to destroy the city; which i could do alone without you freaks of nature ruining my time of peace!!

Rizuk: *holding his stomach* eeeugh... fine..

Soarz: whatever... ow! *is hit by a rock that was thrown by rizuk in the head*

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FLASH BACK~

Xeche: *falls on his side and hears Xute and Peace's voices barely; he sees them approach him but everything is silent, black and white*

Xute: xeche!

Peace: xute, look!

Xute: ?!

Peace: !?

Xeche: *they tend to his wound from the poizun kunai*

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Tentako: I'm Tentako, a freshman.

Hope: awww!!! *pinches his cheeks* (the face ones you perverts lol)

Tentako: *eye twitching* could you STOP that.

Hope: OW! *at the word 'stop' Tentako shocked her*

Koyuki: okay okay kid, we thank you for helping us but really, it wouldnt be very cool to hang out with a freshman like yourself.

Tentako: are you calling me UNcool?! *his whole body electrifies*

Koyuki: ._. ......no?

Tentako: ^_^ okay then *looks at hope* heh? *still sparking* *looks down* weehh... crap...

Hope: what?

Tentako: *blushes*

Hope: *realizes part of her breast is showing from where Tentako shockes her. (there's a hole in her shirt on the side) AHHHHH!!! *slaps Tentako while saying* PERVERT!

Koyuki: *takes off her jacket and gives it to Hope*

Hope: thanks ^_^