Sonic and the amazing cruise.

well i thought i should put this up, feel free to comment under it, i will post a bit every one in a while then the whole thing when its done, ok here we go.

"Ohhhhhh Man, I cant wait" Said Amy eagerly. She had been waiting for this day for a while. It was the day she, Sonic, Cream, Tails, Knuckles, Rouge, Tikial, Shadow, and the Chaotix would all go on a cruise. She had been counting down the days untill today. Suddenly she heard a honking comming from outside her house. She walked outside and saw a large Maroon sazuki, Amy knew just whose car it was, it was none other than Sonic The Hedgehog's. He honked a few more times and Amy opend the door and signaled for sonic to come in. He turned off the truck and ran over to Amy before she could move. "Hey Amy" He said.
"Ahhh" Amy Shrieked "sonic you scared me"
"Oh, well sorry Amy" He appoligized " Is everyone here?"
"Everyone but Tails, he called and said he hed a surprise for us." She replied.
"A Surprise, huh, I wonder what it is, knowing tails its probably something Completly useless, and unnecessary, and like always he will probably over do it again." Sonic rambled. Amy gigled and said " Yeah probably, You wanna come in and see the others?" Sonic nodded and walked inside Amy's pink house.

Well thats it for now, i would have posted more but my brother john is trying to kick me off so more will be up later, dont forget to comment.

well i read the everything wrote in ur note book twice and as i normally say its good just always check ur grammar and i find it funny that u always include ur char as a side char and every body else u'll see what i mean after he posts more of the story

Bravo! Nice Story

Genesis wrote:

"Ohhhhhh Man, I cant wait" Said Amy eagerly.

I can't wait either, Amy! ^_^

Me Either mom

Nice Story so far genesis

Aright, time for the next part, remember to comment on it please.

As sonic entered the house he looked around, and there in the living room were some familiar faces. There was Knuckles, The red haired knuckle headed guardian of the master emerald, Tikial, who had been released from the master emerald 2 years after the Meterex battle, Shadow, Who used a new form of chaos control to free himself from being frozen in time (you just can't kill him unfortunately) Rouge, The master jewel thief/government agent, Cream, Amy's sidekick to sonic and Tails, and the Chaotix, Espio, Vector, and Charmy, all either sitting on the coach or by the couch. Everyone was watching Amy's tv, everyone but Cream and Charmy. They where busy playing their game boy advance sp's. They had barrowed Amy's pink link cable to connect the to and where battling each other in pokemon fire red and leaf green.

This one is a little short but i will be posting a really long one later, so comment and i will see you then.

OH MY GOD CHAOTIX IS IN THIS! WEEE!! They're my best friends!

Tikal resurected from the dead! She's cool.

Don't kill Shadow! He doesn't die because he's immortal... That's not a problem, is it?

Nice story! Heheh, Cream and Charmy are Pokemon battling! I wonder what kind of Pokemon they have...?

yeah it would be interesting too see there pokemon lol.

The storys not bad can't wait too see whats next

Keep writing! ^_^